Focus & Introduction 7 marks
 There is a clear introduction that outlines the topic, and contextualises and profiles the scope, content and the sequence of the essay topic.

Content, Evidence & Examples 42 marks
The content is relevant to the topic. Student has highlighted in detail all the relevant significant factors; explained and analysed the concepts and or issues and their importance. Referred to relevant theory and literature to support their reasoning and examples are presented.

Critical Thinking & Reasoning 15 marks
 There is evidence of both depth and breadth of reading. An argument is presented and well supported with evidence. Emphasised the importance of consumer/carer perspectives throughout the discussion.

Closing paragraph 7 marks
 There is a concluding paragraph which restates the topic, provides a summary of all of the key points, and presents an overall conclusion

Sequencing & Accuracy 3 marks
 The content in the essay matches the outline presented in the introductory paragraph. Most paragraphs are organised in a logical manner so that content flows from one paragraph to the next, and there are clear linking sentences that link each paragraph to the next. The essay ends with a rational conclusion.

Sources & Referencing 3 marks
Credible and relevant references are used. Accurate use of APA referencing style on most occasions. Accurate use of in-text citations. Uses between 18 – 20 references

Sentence Structure, Grammar, Spelling & Punctuation 3 marks
 There are no errors with grammar, spelling and punctuation that impact readability, and the meaning is easily discernible

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