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Hello Group #15,
Your presentation on Knowles Adult Learning Theory was easy to understand and follow. Additionally, the audio was well done and the slide colors were consistent and easy on the eyes! The grammar was well done. As for the punctuation, some bullets on a slide ended with periods and others did not. Might be a good idea to be consistent on each slide.
One item that I can think of for improvement that has not already been mentioned is the font. Although there is consistency with the font being Century Gothic (one of my favorites) I notice that each slide has a different font size. APA is 12 point font Times New Roman. I am not sure if we had to follow this tightly or not for presentations.
Overall, I thought you had a very nice presentation! Great Job!