I need an essay about for the research I attached below i have my teachers comments below here. The essay should be 1400-1500 words and it should be done by Wednesday. I want the paper to be 100 percent plagiarism free.
I think that you have a lot of good chunks of writing that can be used in your paper. What you need to do now is work on the organization of information. I think that slightly adjusting your thesis might be a good way to begin.
-I think that it would strengthen your thesis if instead of saying that Saddam invaded wrongfully, you said something like "despite Saddam Hussein's claim that he invaded Kuwait because of a historical claim to the territory, the actual motivation for the invasion was economic"
Once you have tightened your argument, you would need to establish how Saddam's greed/corruption led him to get involved in the Iran-Iraq war, destroyed the Iraqi economy, and ultimately led him to see the invasion of Kuwait as a possible solution to his need for more money/power.