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(24 marks for content and organisation and 16 marks for technical accuracy) Â [40 marks]
Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features to support coherence and cohesion of texts.
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Skills Descriptors |
How to arrive a mark. |
Level 4 19-24 marks Compelling, Convincing |
Upper Level 4 22-24 marks |
Content ⢠Register is convincing and compelling for audience ⢠Assuredly matched to purpose ⢠Extensive and ambitious vocabulary with sustained crafting of linguistic devices Organisation ⢠Varied and inventive use of structural features ⢠Writing is compelling, incorporating a range of convincing and complex ideas ⢠Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse |
At the top of the range, a studentâs response will meet all of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower range of Level 4 and at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from the upper range of Level 4 |
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Lower Level 4 19-21 marks |
Content ⢠Register is convincingly matched to audience ⢠Convincingly matched to purpose ⢠Extensive vocabulary with conscious crafting of linguistic devices Organisation ⢠Varied and effective structural features ⢠Writing is highly engaging with a range of developed complex ideas ⢠Consistently coherent use of paragraphs with integrated discourse markers |
At the top of the range, a studentâs response will meet all of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation At the bottom of the range, a student will have the upper range of Level 3 and at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from the lower range of Level 4 |
Level 3 13-18 marks Consistent, Clear   |
Upper Level 3 16-18 marks |
Content ⢠Register is consistently matched to audience ⢠Consistently matched to purpose ⢠Increasingly sophisticated vocabulary and phrasing, chosen for effect with a range of successful linguistic devices Organisation ⢠Effective use of structural features ⢠Writing is engaging, using a range of clear connected ideas ⢠Coherent paragraphs with integrated discourse markers |
At the top of the range, a studentâs response will meet all of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower range of Level 3 and at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from the upper range of Level 3 |
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Lower Level 3 13-15 marks |
Content ⢠Register is generally matched to audience ⢠Generally matched to purpose ⢠Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect and appropriate use of linguistic devices Organisation ⢠Usually effective use of structural features ·        Writing is engaging, with a range of connected ideas ⢠Usually coherent paragraphs with range of discourse markers |
At the top of the range, a studentâs response will meet all of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation At the bottom of the range, a student will have the upper range of Level 2 and at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from the lower range of Level 3 |
Level 2 7-12 marks Some success |
Upper Level 2 10-12 marks |
Content ⢠Some sustained attempt to match register to audience ⢠Some sustained attempt to match purpose ⢠Conscious use of vocabulary with some use of linguistic devices Organisation ⢠Some use of structural features ⢠Increasing variety of linked and relevant ideas ⢠Some use of paragraphs and some use of discourse markers |
At the top of the range, a studentâs response will meet all of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower range of Level 2 and at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from the upper range of Level 2 |
Level 1 1-6 marks Simple, Limited |
Upper Level 1 4-6 marks |
Content ⢠Simple awareness of register/audience ⢠Simple awareness of purpose ⢠Simple vocabulary; simple linguistic devices Organisation ⢠Evidence of simple structural features ⢠One or two relevant ideas, simply linked ⢠Random paragraph structure |
At the top of the range, a studentâs response will meet all of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower range of Level 1 and at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from the upper range of Level 1 |
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Lower Level 1 1-3 marks |
Content ⢠Occasional sense of audience ⢠Occasional sense of purpose ⢠Simple vocabulary Organisation ⢠Limited or no evidence of structural features ⢠One or two unlinked ideas ⢠No paragraphs |
At the top of the range, a studentâs response will meet all of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation At the bottom of the range, a student will have at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from the lower range of Level 1 |
Candidates must use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation. (This requirement must constitute 20% of the marks for each specification as a whole.)