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Creative Writing Competition: The Day That Changed My Life

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• Look at the mark scheme and Assessment Objectives and ensure that you cover them in your response.

 

 You are going to enter a creative writing competition. Your entry will be judged by a panel of people of your own age. Either Write a description suggested by this picture

 

 

1. Write the opening part of a biography or autobiography where you narrate a life-changing event titled, ‘The day that changed my life.’
(24 marks for content and organisation and 16 marks for technical accuracy)  [40 marks]

Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features to support coherence and cohesion of texts.

Level

 

Skills Descriptors

How to arrive a mark.

Level 4

19-24 marks

Compelling,

Convincing

Upper

Level 4

22-24

marks

Content

• Register is convincing and compelling for audience

• Assuredly matched to purpose

• Extensive and ambitious vocabulary with sustained crafting of linguistic devices

Organisation

• Varied and inventive use of structural features

• Writing is compelling, incorporating a range of convincing and complex ideas

• Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse

At the top of the range, a student’s response will meet

all of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation

At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower

range of Level 4 and at least one of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation from

the upper range of Level 4

 

Lower

Level 4

19-21

marks

Content

• Register is convincingly matched to audience

• Convincingly matched to purpose

• Extensive vocabulary with conscious crafting of linguistic devices

Organisation

• Varied and effective structural features

• Writing is highly engaging with a range of developed complex ideas

• Consistently coherent use of paragraphs with integrated discourse markers

At the top of the range, a student’s response will meet

all of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation

At the bottom of the range, a student will have the upper

range of Level 3 and at least one of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation from

the lower range of Level 4

Level 3

13-18 marks

Consistent,

Clear

 

 

Upper

Level 3

16-18

marks

Content

• Register is consistently matched to audience

• Consistently matched to purpose

• Increasingly sophisticated vocabulary and phrasing, chosen for effect with a range of successful linguistic devices

Organisation

• Effective use of structural features

• Writing is engaging, using a range of clear connected ideas

• Coherent paragraphs with integrated discourse markers

At the top of the range, a student’s response will meet

all of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation

At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower

range of Level 3 and at least one of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation from

the upper range of Level 3

 

Lower

Level 3

13-15

marks

Content

• Register is generally matched to audience

• Generally matched to purpose

• Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect and appropriate use of linguistic devices

Organisation

• Usually effective use of structural features

·         Writing is engaging, with a range of connected ideas

• Usually coherent paragraphs with range of discourse markers

At the top of the range, a student’s response will meet

all of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation

At the bottom of the range, a student will have the upper

range of Level 2 and at least one of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation from

the lower range of Level 3

Level 2

7-12 marks

Some

success

Upper

Level 2

10-12

marks

Content

• Some sustained attempt to match register to audience

• Some sustained attempt to match purpose

• Conscious use of vocabulary with some use of linguistic devices

Organisation

• Some use of structural features

• Increasing variety of linked and relevant ideas

• Some use of paragraphs and some use of discourse markers

At the top of the range, a student’s response will meet

all of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation

At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower

range of Level 2 and at least one of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation from

the upper range of Level 2

Level 1

1-6 marks

Simple,

Limited

Upper

Level 1

4-6 marks

Content

• Simple awareness of register/audience

• Simple awareness of purpose

• Simple vocabulary; simple linguistic devices

Organisation

• Evidence of simple structural features

• One or two relevant ideas, simply linked

• Random paragraph structure

At the top of the range, a student’s response will meet

all of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation

At the bottom of the range, a student will have the lower

range of Level 1 and at least one of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation from

the upper range of Level 1

 

Lower

Level 1

1-3 marks

Content

• Occasional sense of audience

• Occasional sense of purpose

• Simple vocabulary

Organisation

• Limited or no evidence of structural features

• One or two unlinked ideas

• No paragraphs

At the top of the range, a student’s response will meet

all of the skills descriptors for

Content and Organisation

At the bottom of the range, a student will have at least one of the skills descriptors for Content and Organisation from

the lower range of Level 1

Candidates must use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation. (This requirement must constitute 20% of the marks for each specification as a whole.)

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