effective writting

i couldnt find this subject in your list.its a subject from Certificate III in business.
i have done one part on three of the first assessment so i will just send you the part B and the part C with his document.

PART B

To: [email protected]

Subject: Re Regarding Sydney Harbour Cruises

We are extremely happy to hear from you regarding the entourage of our cruise from Circular Quay on 11^th of March next year. It is of immense pleasure for us to let you know that we will definitely make arrangements as per your requirements. The cruise ordinarily does not go through that route but based on several requests from potential customers like you, we fell delighted to announce that we would love to take the tour from the path waterways near Circular Quay. The point of concern regarding the matter is that the waterways near the Circular Quay are below the minimum depth required to have a successful sail of the cruise. Hence, on our part, we regret to inform you that we shall not be able to pick you up in the Captain Cook Cruise from Circular Quay. Rather, a yacht will take you from your location till the mid waters and from there; you can board our luxury cruise and enjoy your stay with us. As far as the prices of our sea food buffet lunch are concerned, that will cost around $80 for a single person and $180 for two people if purchased under the combo offers. We shall let you know the prices 15 days in advance because they are likely to change every 2 months.

We can assure you that your stay with us in the Captain Cook Cruise will be simply an amazing experience for you. You can keep aside all your worries and enjoy your board with us. We specialize in various kinds of menu as per the tastes of our customers and we also customize food as per their requirements. Our menu ranges from a variety of seafood preparations that are simply mouth watering. We boast of giving the best Calamari to our gusts. The variety ranges from prawns to oysters, to crabs to squids. The desserts are prepared in very less sugar content so that the customers can have them freely without any guilt on health implications.

We can also say that considering our affordable prices, we assure the best service in town. We shall be looking forward to having you on board for an awesome experience with us.

Please confirm your stay so that our customer service executive can get in touch with you.

Regards,

M/s Captain Cooks Cruise Services

Sydney Harbour.

PART C

FAX

Company Name: Australian Pacific Travel

Phone: 02 9251 7001

FAX: 02 9241 1841

Address: 189, Kent Street

Sydney

NSW 2000

Number of Pages

(Including this page) 2

Message:

Hi Ken,

This is David Duran from Australian Pacific Travel.

• We have had a very positive feedback of Warner Bros Theme Parks and would love to have your name included in our brochure. We are one of the fastest growing wholesalers and we would like to have your name included in our customer list.
• We would like to have a commission of 25% o all sales and in return of it, we will be providing you with a 4 page brochure space in our brochure.
• You can meet us up on 3^rd December at the Gold Coast.

Yours,

David Duran (Australian Pacific Travel)